ACrop Posted May 5, 2017 Report Share Posted May 5, 2017 I am a fan of the three kites in one graphic. While it may not be the right thing for this particular project, I would like to see it done with just the kite and each of the three kite typed picked out a bit more clearly through color use. I think that that could find future use somewhere.While is is hard that JB is so clear in what he wants it makes me more interested and excited to see where this ends up. I really like the RWB sports style kite logo. I would like to see that done with a quad. [emoji6]Sent from my Nexus 5X using KiteLife mobile app 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ACrop Posted May 5, 2017 Report Share Posted May 5, 2017 This back logo is pretty bad ass too... What if we took and overhead view of a team line and put it at the bottom of that graphic? Kinda like this:https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2ZyaoDcHD8XNS1xRVF6T2VIbnc/view?usp=drivesdkBut more artistically done of course...Sent from my Nexus 5X using KiteLife mobile app Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makatakam Posted May 5, 2017 Report Share Posted May 5, 2017 One more time -- yeehaw! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbailey49 Posted May 5, 2017 Report Share Posted May 5, 2017 On 4/29/2017 at 8:26 AM, riffclown said: Does this help? Riff, can you point me to the source image you're working from here? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riffclown Posted May 5, 2017 Report Share Posted May 5, 2017 @bbailey49 I captured a still frame out of their video SPI 2017 Body Work.. Here's a shot pretty close to my original capture frame. The original capture is the second picture which was edited to get the truck out of the background.. BTW, it's also the same shot for the other logos I did as well.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 10, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2017 Here's my draft at the moment... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 10, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2017 Revision to include dogstake... Now trying to figure out placement of "TKL" in the image, as well as color arrangements. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ACrop Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Does the line color endorse a specific line brand:)Sent from my Nexus 5X using KiteLife mobile app 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Maaaaaaaaybe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ACrop Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 It seems like the kite line and silhouette and lines are thinner and more delicate in the old white version....and I think I liked them that way. The one question I have is the lack of representation of team....Sent from my Nexus 5X using KiteLife mobile app 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 We're not worried about it, although it's a fair thought. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Slightly more delicate lines... Left yellow off just for this example. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Gray Pugh Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 I like the more delicate lines. I think John wins the contest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 I'll figure out something to award those who contributed pieces at the very least, couldn't have gotten this far without discussion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Latest draft, just working on fitting in the full team name or URL along the circle somehow. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riffclown Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Like this?? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 That's the idea, maybe slimmer text for the URL, made as part of the circular border? (can be made a bit thicker) Goal is to make it part of the existing circular, less of a "header" or "footer". Also, what software are you using Riff? I can send you my AI file if it helps... Good looking curved text seems to be beyond my skills, I do appreciate the help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ACrop Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Like this?? That is cool. I think it might even be more readable if we could get a tiny space between the words around d the circle. The .com part could also be smaller if needed. I like the circle of the logo, and the Rocky peak makes me chuckle a little bit...where exactly is he flying?? I think that we should ask some non kiter folk what they think he is doing in the logo just to be sure that there is no odd implications to the logo that we don't see with our kite focused eyes.Sent from my Nexus 5X using KiteLife mobile app 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 He's flying toward the peak, in epic conditions, never quite arriving but always reaching for it with the kite(s). Outside sets of eyes, good call. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ACrop Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 It would also be fun to put a kite pin at the end of his lines....could even extend the lines beyond the circle for this. Then you could attach whatever style you fly to the end of JBs dogstake lines. Sent from my Nexus 5X using KiteLife mobile app 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makatakam Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 I like the first version, without the dogstake lines. Cleaner, less busy. What happened to four silhouettes? Have you given up on that concept? I do very much like ACrop's version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riffclown Posted May 11, 2017 Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 I can be the circle if you like.. I tend to use an old (Pre-Corel) version of Paint Shop Pro. I have the Adobe suite as well but I'm not nearly as practiced with it.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 Riff, do me a variant same style with the URL text twice as big (less iterations naturally)? Maybe 4-5 iterations instead? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Barresi Posted May 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2017 1 hour ago, makatakam said: I like the first version, without the dogstake lines. Cleaner, less busy. What happened to four silhouettes? Have you given up on that concept? I do very much like ACrop's version. Not given up on 4 completely, may try resizing the one and adding more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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