Great to see you out and flying -- the kite pattern and colors are very nice. I like it.
Watch some more JB tutorials where you can see his hands all the time and the kite too (picture in picture). You'll notice that his hands move a lot, but his arms don't. Try using yours wrists more and your arms less. The Rev can be flown very nicely with your wrists tied (literally) together.
For only the second time, you are doing fine. Again, try to find an experienced flyer somewhere. Believe me, it will be worth the drive to get there. You will learn more in one hour flying with someone else than in a month of flying alone. If that is not possible, just keep flying as often as you can. It will come to you, don't give up. I learned on my own also, so I know all the frustration you will feel. Wait for wind in the 6 to 15 km range; it is very difficult to learn anything if you are fighting the lack of wind or too much of it. Watch the tutorial videos often, and not too many at once. Pick one or two and practice those, or just fly the three things I have outlined below.
Once you have mastered basic control, everything else will be much easier.
I recommend these three things to form a good foundation; repeat each item ten times, flying as slow as possible without wobbling.
1. Fly straight up from the ground to the top of the window, from the top lower the kite slowly back to the ground. Repeat.
2. " " " " " " " " " , turn the kite over and fly to the ground slowly. Repeat.
3. Launch the kite and fly a figure-eight pattern as slowly as possible. Try vertical, horizontal, and various angles. Repeat.
Practice these first each time you fly and you will learn more quickly, and don't worry about running out of things to learn. To learn everything will take more than one lifetime.
DO NOT PRACTICE for more than 20 or 30 minutes. Take frequent breaks to just fly around, or just sit. Once you fly each of these three things 100 times, going slower each time, you will have very good control of the kite. If you fly item #2 one hundred times, going very very very slowly you will discover that you can hover inverted. You will have learned it the easy way. Once you have enough control of the kite that you are not crashing often, sit down and fly the kite. It will force you to use less arm movement, and gain precision.
Most importantly, SMILE, have fun and don't forget to breathe.